At the end of the first book, a former nun named Hannah pens a short litany that becomes the basis for a set of laws as the Taltos become more organized. I like it well enough to share. I was raised Presbyterian, and in a pinch I have an absolute treasure hoard of Biblical knowledge and various litanies and verses rattling around in my head. I used that here.
Cut for length and the fact that probably only I and Storm are interested. :)
( The Litany of the Taltos )
Of course, said nine book series is going to be a while before I get to it, but the plotting is done. :)
( After this, there be spoilers! Do not read if you're planning to play it and don't want parts of the story revealed! )
Problem: this is a form of self-publishing, and it really limits future publishability of the work. I would love to post the Newfoundland book rough draft as I finish chapters, but I honestly think that book has publication potential once I finish it. Of course, the problem is...will I finish it if I don't have that immediate feedback?
I don't know. I'm considering writing a couple of things that will just be online serials--a few other people are doing that, and actually making some money off of it.
Thoughts, anyone?
Not so much. I had an entire class full of people staring at me as if I'd just started spouting Ancient Wisdom. And, you know, it was awesome.
I thought I was tired of Web stuff; evidently not. I'm going to see if I can arrange to teach some classes, because I am definitely qualified.

( more pictures this way.... )
Once they were done, I had a little while before I had to leave, so I decided to take them for a quick walk. I was walking on a street near our house, when I came upon a house where three large huskies were being loaded into the back of a truck. Boone, as usual, decided to be a butt and fuss at the dogs he could see. I saw one of the huskies pause and stare thoughtfully at Boone.
The first warning was that the husky didn't bark. Dogs usually vocalize warning to strangers on their territory. Instead, the dog loped forward, followed by his two packmates. They covered twenty feet in hardly a blink, paused to size up my dogs, and promptly attacked. This was not dominance or guarding territory--there was no threat-response pattern. This was a hunt.
The huskies grabbed both of my dogs--one of them got his mouth around Boone's hip and actually tossed him into the air. The owner of the huskies was nearby and together we got the dogs separated, but man that was scary. None of the dogs were leashed, and I'm guessing that this wasn't the first time these dogs had packed up to hunt. The dogs, though small, are large enough that they're not easily mistaken for prey, though Boone has a bit of a communication problem because of his ears and tail.
I checked them over briefly, not wanting to make a huge fuss over them--no blood or open wounds, no immediate limping--and we resumed our walk. On checking them over more thoroughly when we got home, Boone certainly has some bruising on his spine and one hip, and Pip seems pretty stiff as well. (Going to the vet tomorrow!) I had to drop Pip's leash to get Boone away from the huskies, and fortunately she didn't decide to take off for the hills and came right back when I called. So, you know, good puppies.
But, man. LEASH YOUR DOGS, people. The owner was appropriately concerned and apologetic, which was good. But still, prevention! Had these dogs been under control, it wouldn't have happened.

Still looking for a job--had an interview last week, but though I haven't recieved official word, I don't think it panned out. I wasn't what they were looking for, which is probably all to the good, to be honest. I have a bunch of stories out and I'm not hearing back on any of those either. I recovered from the intestinal Doom only to surge right into menstrual Doom, which with the application of painkillers and chocolate is beginning to resolve. I'm working on the photography business, where "working" = making lists of things that need to be done. As much as I hate to do it, I need to get a PO Box to use as a business address due to the bylaws of our neighborhood association. I finished a short story rewrite last week, but I now fear I was on crack when I wrote it. Doing research on Newfoundland.
I had a Starbucks Gold card (the lovely card that gives you a discount on stuff), but I dropped it when I was in Bellevue last week, I think, and now it's been deactivated. So I'm slightly cranky about that, except for the fact that I've not really been going to Starbucks at all, so there's not much to be cranky about. I was going to have to renew soon, anyway.
Halloween is coming, the weather has turned, and my life is filled with a sense of waiting. Something's bound to change, soon.
Edit: And, with some more research, I've discovered a couple of other things that make the idea of running my photography as a small business pretty much infeasible. Lovely. I'll chat with the teacher of my class next week, but I think I'd best stick with "serious hobbyist" for the moment.
West Valley, appropriately, hugs the west side of the valley. Turning right off of it, the road went from “oh, look, funeral home” to “OMG so beautiful” in about thirty seconds as it climbed the side of the valley.. It was raining intermittently—the first real fall weather system we’ve had this year—and everything was wet and green, the trees making a tunnel for the road.
The cemetery itself was a disappointment; I was hoping for something with monuments. Alas, it’s a modern cemetery with mostly flat headstones and not a monument to be seen. The drive up to it was well worth it, though, and I noticed that there is a viewpoint park right across the street from the cemetery.
So, well worth the trip.
I took a few pictures while I was out at the house, among them this one of a lovely little Pacific Tree Frog in the sage.
Any suggestions?
Go to my Flickr stream for more. Start here.
Poll #1461246 what next?
Open to: All, detailed results viewable to: All, participants: 33
I always have to be working on something new. So, the question is, what next?
Romanian vampires and werewolves, and a vampire hunter who pretty much loses everything she loved. (Vampires. Sigh. I love this story, but it's got vampires.)![]()
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1 (3.0%)
Middle eastern angels and jinn, a woman posing as a man and leading a holy order of assassins (requires a lot of research)![]()
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6 (18.2%)
Messy druid politics, set in the same world as the drow (aka the Big World)![]()
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2 (6.1%)
A retelling of the events of the end of the Second Opium War from the point of view of a shamelessly hedonistic thief![]()
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7 (21.2%)
Nightmarchers in ancient Hawaii, and a woman who thoughtlessly breaks a kapu and spends the rest of the story trying to put things right![]()
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3 (9.1%)
Creepy Newfoundland asylum where a nurse is about to find out that a few of the inmates are a whole lot more than they seem.![]()
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14 (42.4%)
(Please don't ask what the heck I'm going to do with a 13k-word kid's talking animals book written in my normal voice. That's too long for a short story and too short for anything except maybe a chapter book. And a chapter book this is most definitely not--too much vocabulary and I'm up to my usual tricks with sentence structure.
But! It's done and now I have to decide what book to write next. Perhaps I will do a poll.)

There were a surprising number of dogs at all the rest stops. Pip and Boone alternately looked out the window and napped all the way there. They were happy once they got to the hotel, which was very nice--it had elevators, which they absolutely love. Little dogs like the high life! Pip thought that being on the fifth floor was awesome. "It's a BIG cul-de-sac!" she said.

The only less-than-good thing about the hotel was that the nearest place to potty them was a block away, and they're used to going out first thing in the morning. Fortunately, the novelty of sleeping on the bed with the humans meant that they weren't hugely excited about getting up, which gave me a chance to put on some clothes before taking them out. We were awakened by cheering; the Run for the Cure route went right by our hotel. Getting across the street so little dogs could potty was...interesting, to say the least.
Then we hung out for a bit and packed up, left our leggage with the front desk and went to the Saturday Market (which also runs on Sundays). I was very impressed by how well both dogs did, especially Boone. He stuck right by me in the crowds, paid attention to me, and even when we passed other dogs he didn't do much other than whine. He was so happy to be walking with his pack, and he behaved himself in a mostly exemplary fashion. Didn't even grumble much at the many small children he encountered (and fortunately, none of them tried to pet him).
And then it was back on the road for us and home. It was a lovely weekend!
Also got about 4200 words into Spot and Whisk; four more days like today and I'd probably be done with it. I have a feeling I'm going to need to knock down the vocabulary a bit on it when I'm done. And now I am gtoing to go to an otientation for a small business class. We'll see how that goes.
Pip loved doing the demo. She adored the fair ("Crowds? They must all be here to see ME!") and she was super-happy when it was time to get into the ring. The preceding two hours, she was not terribly fond of. Impatient puppies want to get out there and perform!
Pip: Someone's in the street! Bark bark BARK!
Boone: Pip is barking, must relay the message! *goes into a paroxysm of barking that quickly resolves into actual howling*
Me: Hilarious, dogs. Shut it. *gets up*
Boone: *shuts it*
Pip: *fails to shut it*
Me: *goes downstairs*
Pip, the moment she sees me: Bark? Errrr.
Me: You just lost window privileges, dog.
Pip: *rolls over on back, looks cute* That was...Some Other Dog! Not me! I'm cute and sweet and I would never bark like a mad thing!
Me: So where is this Some Other Dog?
Pip: ...invisible?
Me: Good try. *closes shades*
Pip: *follows me up the stairs and throws herself at my feet, sighing* I am SO DEPRIVED.
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Okay, okay, obviously it's going to be a dog workout this morning.
I was going to do a short run anyway, and when we got out to the trail Spotty Dog said that he was a bit sore this morning and he'd like to walk instead of run, thank you. So we went for a mile, and then I turned the dogs loose in the dog park so Red Dog could run and Spotty Dog could stick close to me and occasionally worry a bit about the other dogs in the park. Came back, did some work with them on weave poles and the booja board while Laura dealt with the city inspector for our new furnace installation, went and got coffee for Laura.
I'm getting ready for a wedding shoot this weekend and working on another edit pass on Shadows and Silk (aka "magic ninjas"). I've dealt with one major problem (it needed a new beginning scene) and I have a couple more major problems to deal with. One is a bunch of little cultural details that add up to one large problem, and the other one is that the fantasy element still doesn't come in until the middle of the third chapter, and I really need to find a way to introduce it in the first few pages. It's kind of rough because of how the plot is structured, but I think I can work in some background information that will clue the reader in that there is stuff going on that my protagonist doesn't necessarily know about yet.
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